WRITING TIPS: KNOCK IT OUT FIRST THING

The clock has struck 8 o’clock in the PM. You haven’t written all day–certainly intended to, needed to–but you didn’t. But you can’t stay up late, you’re all out of energy. You know whatever you force yourself to write you’ll have to rewrite. Why did you wait so long?

Most of us have all experienced that feeling that ‘now’ just isn’t the time to write something. We argue we don’t have time, we’re too drowsy, we just ate, or we need to wake up more.

Everyone is different, but when I’m making a run at a novel or other daily writing goal, getting it out of the way first thing really opens up the rest of the day. With the writing requirement fulfilled it takes the weight of stress off finding a time to write.

So, pour that hot tea or coffee and knock it out before the rest of your day (and your mind) decide ‘now’ is not the time.

FREE SHORT STORY: SLED AND YOU’RE DEAD!

Dear Potential Reader,

Need any reminders of the winter? Here’s one last snowy tale before the weather gets so hot we start to miss the opportunity for snow and school closings. In this tale, three boys get the day off with their dad for some backyard sledding and terror . . .

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I’m of the variety of a person that loves seeing snow. I grew up plunging my face into the snow, trying to get that perfect frost-bitten look before mumbling, ‘Ben . . . Dagobah . . . Yoda . . .”

I still like to be reminded of winter weather (as we tend to get less and less here in Central Virginia). I’ll pop in EMPIRE STRIKES BACK or THE THING. But now that I’m older and snow impacts my safety and schedule, I do secretly cross my fingers for a warm winter. Perhaps the characters in this short story feel the same way.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: VERMILLION

Vermillion is this bright red color that looks like a fresh brick or how we’ve imagined the planet Mars for so long before a rover landed on it.

It’s a very specific red. It feels like it has teeth.

If you told me a character showed up in a shiny red car, my expectation would be a regular sports car–or just a new car. But if you told me he showed up in a shiny vermillion car, now I’m imagining something classic, something expensive, and the person stepping out of it might very well be hazardous to my health.

When reading, we pass over words we’ve seen a lot. They are unconsciously absorbed and exchanged for the next word. Words like ‘the’ ‘a’ ‘is’, they hardly register. And really you want those words to just serve their function, but when it comes to describing a scene or setting a mood, we need words that will trigger a response.

Basic colors like ‘white, brown, black, green, red, gray, blue, yellow, orange, purple’ will hold little sway in invoking the kind of imagery that wakes a reader’s mind and strikes them with that visual that transports them from written word to your scene.

Try using specific shades rather than sticking to the parts of the color wheel we all learned in kindergarten.

Of course, if you overuse those specific colors, they’re likely to lose their impact.

FREE SHORT STORY: SPIDERFACE

Dear Potential Reader,

The following short story a gross one. Told to gross out. Your mileage may vary.

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This was a bedtime story told a bit briefer one night . . . and then was requested a second night. Either way, it’s never as great once it’s put to paper and the audience of an interested child or two isn’t there to make it feel like you’ve mastered storytelling.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: SECLUDE YOURSELF

I can’t imagine writing in a coffee shop. But we see that in movies and TV shows all the time. it’s different for different people, but I believe I write best alone.

Purchasing a laptop really helped, although having an office and a desktop where you can close a door is great too. But for me, the laptop allowed me to write away from an internet connection in my car where no one would bother me.

Go somewhere you can tune out your surroundings. Find a time when distractions aren’t likely. Put the smart phone away and any other temptations.

If you make writing time about writing, you’ll be able to write, and the further away you can get from all the things you need to do around the house, the easier it’ll be not to procrastinate.