WRITING TIPS: TRY THE RED PEN

This one actually comes from my brother. His was a solution to art. When he couldn’t digitally paint, he’d switch to pencil. If that didn’t work, he’d switch the paper from white to a yellow legal pad, he’d switch to painting or markers, or . . . a red pen.

When we’re blocked creatively, it helps to switch up how we’re trying to create.

If you can’t type on your laptop, try handwriting your story. Try different inks, or on your computer try different fonts. Change something.

A lot of writing is the art of tricking your mind to do it after it says it can’t.

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FREE SHORT STORY: THE PLUCK

Dear Potential Reader,

Let me present THE PLUCK, a tale of the Hatchback Woman and a young male whose ability to manipulate things around him is out of hand (literally).

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Immaturity is what drives a lot of stories, as it does here. As kids, teens, we often imagine the ability to be invisible. Most males share the same couple of things they’d do first with such a power. As morality develops (or not) or as we age, we can look back and understand the inappropriateness of these actions. As people we have to constantly grow and learn empathy. Even in my 40’s now, I’m still finding new ways to empathize and realizing past viewpoints that were narrow and wrong. This story is a snapshot of such an immature approach to a great power. It is horror what a small mind can and will do if given the ability to. For that, I am quite thankful that certain powers are not bestowed upon us at such a young age, because some sins don’t just wash away and some pasts we have to run from our entire life.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: SPEAK TO ONE PERSON

I recall reading somewhere that Kurt Vonnegut wrote his stories with his sister in mind, as if he was speaking to her.

Vonnegut’s work has always had that nice quality of be present with him as the story is being told. Not in an auditorium, but like you’re both standing on an elevator together, shoulder to shoulder and his mustache is threating to bristle your ear.

I think he achieved this quality by writing as if he was telling someone close to him the story.

When we tell a story to a person, there are things we would tell one person that we wouldn’t tell another.

You’re not going to tell your boss the reason you’re late is that you were out having the grandest adventure and just got in the door twenty minutes ago. But you’re probably going to tell that one work pal–maybe including a few embellishments, leaving out the embarrassing parts. You’ll cater it to them.

There are things they know and things they don’t, and you will have to give them those background stories. Maybe they don’t know that cohort of yours that kept you out late. Now you have to tell them that cohort’s life story, so they understand why you didn’t just go home.

I’ve tried a few people (not my sister yet though), and I notice the results tend to resonate stronger with me than when I’m just trying to put the story to paper. When I’m thinking about that other person and telling them the details that they’d find interesting, it seems clearer to me what I should write. The story might not take on a conversational tone, but it feels more like I’m conversing rather than writing.

Next time you sit down to write, pick one person you know that you want to tell that story to.

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FREE SHORT STORY: THE BAG

Dear Potential Reader,

Is this the first appearance of The Hatchback Woman, aka The Lady? No. But THE BAG, this month’s free-to-read short story, has been the 1st story in all the publications, introducing the readers to Alan Tuel and his first chance meeting with the woman who has something for everyone.

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As with last month, 2023 will present a monthly run of tales of the Hatchback Woman. These have been made available in several collections, and one day will see print along with the other 40 or so tales that currently exist. She’s one of my favorite characters to tap into her world and mythology. Look for how she came to be part of the JIREverse in an upcoming BEHIND THE SCENES post. Or click here, to read about how her stories were originally formulated.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: MUSIC ON REPEAT

One of my oldest tricks for writing is to use music in the background.

I try to find an album or a single song that isn’t too intrusive, but perhaps lends itself to cinematic qualities that match the tone I am looking for.

Using the same music each writing session allows me to return to a similar headspace.

BUT . . . it can get tiresome.

There are a few bands and albums I can’t listen to again since I played them on repeat during a draft.

There are others that I return to, fondly remembering their guidance.

I don’t always listen to music when I write (more often I do not). But I always listen to music in the car. During a novel draft, I will not change whatever album I’m listening to. The time in my car listening to music is generally when I think about what I’ve written and what I want to write next. Having consistent music keeps me in a similar headspace. Of course, after a month of the same album, it’s usually a relief to change up an album when a novel draft is completed.

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