Category: Wording

In reading UNDERSTANDING COMICS by SCOTT MCCLOUD, there’s a moment where he points out that a character facing the left of the panel presents a stop to the action because we read left to right. If the character is facing right, our eyes keep the movement going to the next panel.

If I said that wrong or it’s confusing, go check out his long-heralded study on the comic book medium. It’ll change your life. It reveals not only the workings of comics but of our minds.

So, with that idea in mind, if the way a character is looking can inform us of movement, so can words based on the sound.

START, because of the hard T sound at the end doesn’t move for me. The word START stops.

GO, on the other hand has the open mouth O sound that a singer could draw out. It doesn’t just stop it moves.

Maybe that’s why we don’t say ‘Ready. Set. Start!’

Do or do not, there is no CANNOT.

I don’t like the word CANNOT. Not because of its connotations of being unable to do something/anything/whatever. I just don’t like the look of the word.

I’ve always been more of a CAN’T kind of guy.

CAN’T is the contraction of CANNOT. It’s supposed to be informal, but maybe I just didn’t grow up all hoity toity. CANNOT has always looked like a rotten carrot to me.

I tend to use CANNOT when I have an angry character, someone being stern.

YOU CANNOT HAVE DESERT. HAVE A ROTTEN CARROT INSTEAD.

vs.

I’M SORRY YOU CAN’T HAVE DESSERT BECAUSE OF YOUR TOOTH ACHE.

But there are times where you should use CAN NOT, with the space between. It’s when it comes before a phrase that begins with NOT.

YOU CAN NOT ONLY HAVE DESSERT, BUT A BIG HUG, TOO.

(Sometimes you need a big hug).

Do you know someone that hates the word MOIST?

You’re not alone.

But it’s not me. I will always equate the word MOIST with fresh brownies or a delicious cake. Moist is the opposite of dry and stale. But other people think of gross bodily fluids being moist or hate the way it sounds ‘M-OY-STUH’.

So, it’s a word I’ve tried to learn to be careful with, mostly around my wife. She shudders when I say things like, it was perfectly moist!

It’s good to know if there is a word that triggers people, especially readers, because you wouldn’t want to put them off because of word choice. But now knowing the reaction most people have to the word MOIST, I like to throw it in to the scenes I want to be disgusting. It brings out the sadist in me.

WORDING is an ongoing series of posts on Words I love, misuse, overuse, and/or hate.

I used to use the word THAT a lot. Too much. You know that too much that people notice, and they point out that you do it too much?

That’s how much.

Read the definition . . .

The word itself began in Old English as a pronoun and a demonstrative adjective. Originally a masculine word, it eventually became used in Modern English for all genders.

It’s considered a more specific or emphatic version of ‘THE’ and the two words are often interchangeable.

Hand me THAT cup.

Hand me THE cup.

It can also be used to imply something previously said, like that example above with the cup.

Even though the word belongs in many sentences, if you’re like me and using it too much there are ways to remove it from your writing.

First off, remember that thing about THE above? If THE doesn’t change the intention of your sentence, then you’re good.

You can drop ‘THAT’ anytime it follows a verb:

The president said that we could mail our taxes to him.

VS.

The president said we could mail our taxes to him.

But if there are more words between your verb and dependent clause, you probably will keep THAT.

The president said on TV that we could mail our taxes to him.

VS.

The president said on tv we could mail out taxes to him.

There’s also the case that you might be using THAT when you should be using WHICH.

THAT introduces information, but WHICH precedes information that is not essential, which is why sometimes THAT is wrong.

The president said on TV that we could mail our taxes to him, which sounds illegal.

The president said we could mail our taxes to him that way.

I also look out for THAT used multiple times in a single sentence. Unless it’s how your character speaks, you can and should usually eliminate at least one.

If a sentence sounds awkward without ‘that’, then it needs it. Always be sure to read your sentence out loud.

WORDING is an ongoing series of posts I’ll be making about words. I won’t always delve into proper use. depending on the word and what it means to me and potentially others there may be articles about words that trigger me, words I love, words that always look misspelled to me and more.