FREE STORY: THE PIN

Dear Potential Reader,

Do you ever plan to do something later? When you get the time? When your finances are finally in order? When you finally have a day off? In this month’s Tale of the Hatchback Woman, a young mechanic finds out what he’s been putting off in THE PIN.

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Sometimes, I wish I could take my own advice. But we’re all creatures who secretly crave both the known and the routine. We’re conditioned to stay on a path because of some inherent fear of the unknown. How much do we hold our own selves back because it is simply easier not to rock the boat?

I won’t rock your boat too much, as with the past few months, check in every First Friday of every month for another Tale of the Hatchback Woman.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

FREE SHORT STORY: THE AIR

Dear Potential Reader,

THE AIR is Another tale of the Hatchback Woman is set at a party hosted by a scout leader hoping to teach his scouts a very important lesson. But that couldn’t go as planned, not when one of the Lady’s gifts is present . . .

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The following short story is one of the many Hatchback Woman stories where i tried to hide the formula and approach the ‘telling’ in a different way. In this case, I used a flashback, so the structure is B-A-C instead of the straightforward A-B-C of a normally told tale. Whether this enhances the story is always up for debate.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

BEHIND THE SCENES: THE HATCHBACK WOMAN

This year I’m sharing 12 short stories surrounding the mystery of the Hatchback Woman, aka The Lady. In 2022, I also posted 2 other tales of hers. So, I thought I’d give you all a peak behind the curtain in a new series (that’ll be rather irregular) that looks at the making of and my reasoning behind the stories. If you don’t like to see how the sausage is made, read no further . . .

The Hatchback Woman had to wait on the sidelines, wondering where she fit into the JIREverse when I first began collecting the stories that existed in the same universe. Because I had published her under another name many years before, I was just assuming she didn’t really fit in.

But she does.

And thankfully, it wasn’t even a stretch once I realized that her ‘oh so can’t be disclosed motive’ tied directly into some of the other key happenings in the JIREverse.

It wasn’t that she needed to be fit into the JIREverse–she had help construct it with her objects the imbue the users with strange powers.

Mirroring the some of the other entities I’ve introduced in short stories and novels, The Hatchback Woman is someone helping another one of the other dimensional entities cross over into our world.

Maybe that was a spoiler. But if you’re reading this BEHIND THE SCENES, you are interested enough in the inner workings of the stories to accept you’re going to read something that might spoil another story.

The conception of the HBW tales was a writing exercise. I created a formula for a series of stories:

  1. Someone gets a magical object (has to be different way each time)
  2. The object has a magical power (has to be different power each time)
  3. The object either makes their life better or worse

Pretty simple. And with that, I knocked out a dozen tales (a few weren’t good enough to see the light of day or were revised into something different). Another author I traded stories with became a big fan, and suddenly I found myself investing more time into the mythology.

There was a time when it was going to play out more like a novel, with a Mulder/Scully team tracking her down and there are remnants of some of those chapters and characters. But my test readers didn’t like this direct approach.

In truth, the mystery of her actions, is she good or evil, is part of the fun for me to write. Is she helping or hurting?

27 tales were published through 2016, while dozens more awaited either another collection or my final judgement call whether or not they steered the story in the direction I wanted. But while I moved onto other projects, I’d write at least 1 HATCHBACK WOMAN tale per year, always pleased to return to the formula/world.

Around the time of story #27, I remember thinking it would be cool to have 100 Hatchback Woman tales. And hopefully, one day there will be. I don’t plan to give up her story so easily.

Even though I know the end game and keep trying to complete the prequel story as a novel, she’s constantly evolving and by accepting a place in the greater continuity of the JIREverse, I’m excited to let her story unfold as it may in the background of other characters’ stories and how their interaction with her changes their lives.

To see the free-to-read tales, click here and begin the mystery if you haven’t already . . . and remember . . .

SHE HAS SOMETHING FOR EVERYONE

FREE STORY: THE BURNER

Dear Potential Reader,

Spider Hanson’s good sense would tell him it’s a good thing that people are finally doing what he wants them to do, only the way he communicates isn’t doing him any favors in this month’s free-to-read tales of the Hatchback Woman: THE BURNER.

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Spider turns up a few times in other short stories, something about that name caught me early on and he became an important piece to the puzzle. This is his introduction to the Hatchback Woman, and it’s one of those ones that I hope makes you wonder whose side she’s on.

Now, do as I say and return every First Friday of Every Month in 2023 for another mysterious tale of the Hatchback Woman.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

FREE STORY: THE BIRTHDAY

Dear Potential Reader,

In this month’s free-to-read short story, a man’s chance encounter with the Hatchback Woman at a gas station opens his eyes to his marital problems in THE BIRTHDAY . . .

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One of the things about people watching is how clues lead us to create narratives surrounding their situation. Most people we see are probably not up to anything as strange as The Lady, but we all have our own stories, we’re all in the midst of something whether it’s dire or not. We’re not blank slates that appear for the sake of an NPC (Non Player Character) in a video game. It’s how these stories cross that can be interesting. Are we meeting people at the beginning of a chapter, the middle, or the end? And most importantly—what exactly is going on in their heads that we don’t get to hear?

Tune in every first Friday of every month in 2023 for a Tale of the Hatchback Woman.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE