WRITING TIPS: MOTIVATIONAL QUOTE TIME

One of my favorite mantras to remind myself in times when I can’t write is a quote I’ll attribute to Bill Pace. Whether or not he said it first, I don’t know. But for 12 plus years I’ve heard his voice in my head when I remind myself:

THE ONLY DIFFERENCE BETWEEN US AND THEM, IS THEY’RE DOING IT.

Keep that in mind when you get down or are procrastinating. Whether it’s about seeing someone else’s success or wanting to have accomplished something but haven’t yet. You have to do it. If you want it, do it.

Stop talking about it. Do it.

FREE SHORT STORY: THE EGG

Dear Potential Reader,

Some conversations reveal veiled truths. How would you like to know which came first . . . the chicken or the egg? Join two thieves looking to get back one of the Hatchback Woman’s magical objects in THE EGG.

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If you’ve read THIS, then you know the genesis of the tales of the Hatchback Woman was a writing exercise. That’s it. ‘Let me practice.’ So, it only seemed fitting back in 2020 when I was practicing writing ‘dialog only tales’ that I would try my hand at a Hatchback Woman tale in this format. So here it is, warts and all. And take note, this is the first ever publication of this tale, so remember you read it here first.

Check in every First Friday of every month for another Tale of the Hatchback Woman.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: GO FOR A WALK

Stuck at your keyboard for almost an hour, and you know what you want to write, should write, have to write, but nothing is coming?

The easiest thing to do is get up and get active. Get your brain going by taking a walk outside, or if weather won’t permit, trying tidying something. Something where your mind can wander (not watching TV or surfing the internet).

But set a time to get back to work. Whether you need a timer or just plan to walk a set distance.

Alternatively, setting up a good writing routine is key to any longform writing–like a novel. On occasion, I’ve started writing sessions with a walk around the block first.

I spend this time rehashing what has happened, what will happen, and try to think of the first words that’ll launch me into my writing session.

On days where I plan to write all day, I’ll schedule keyboard time. Every 20-30 minutes of typing, I’ll get up and do something. Whether it’s walking the trash out to the can, fixing hot tea, or walking to the mailbox.

Taking breaks is important.

I’ve always found that just trying to write everything I could all at once always exhausts me and makes it harder to sit down and write the next time.

Plus, you never know when you’ll see something on your walk that’d make a good bit for your story.

FREE STORY: THE FIRE

Dear Potential Reader,

THE FIRE is just the warm story for a scorching hot August day . . . wait . . . did I get this wrong? Probably you would want something cooler to think about. But that’s not in the cards for this tale of the Hatchback Woman. So, get yourself a glass of ice water (or whatever cool beverage you prefer) and join us for the story of an Aunt who means well . . .

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I’m actually not a fan of the smell of smoke and ash. I love sitting out by a fire. But the second I’m done and I come inside the last thing I want to smell is the smoke. Still, the flames themselves have always been captivating. Like watching a wild animal on the verge of breaking out of its cage. We can sit comfortably knowing the fire is contained, but the second it leaps out and begins to spread, then it is the worst kind of animal—because there is no reasoning with fire.

Remember kids, never play with matches, but check back every First Friday of the month for another tale of the Hatchback Woman.

Hope you enjoy.

All the best,

DAN JIRE

WRITING TIPS: THE CHICKEN OR THE EGG

I’ve seen a lot of advice that says to come up with your characters first and then the story.

I practice the opposite.

I tend to come up with a concept or even just a scene to incite the adventure. But whatever that initial concept is, that’s what I develop first. there’s usually a clear path to any concept.

Thieves Plan Heist–>Heist Goes Wrong–>Thieves turn against each other

Once I know what I plan to write about, I invent the characters. Starting with the types I’d need. Then I go back through my plot and envision how these characters will react. This changes the story, but not the idea behind it.

Now that I know some of the scenarios, like what they might be stealing, and who from. I’ll think what would make this plot more interesting, and it’s always the characters.

So what if it’s a mother and daughter team and the daughter has always thought her mother was so cool because they live the wildlife without rules. And the mother is someone filled with great rules and quotes about life, who wouldn’t believe she has it all figured out?

A mother and daughter team of thieves planned a heist–>it goes wrong because the daughter hates her potential stepfather–>The daughter turns against them because they cross a line, killing a guard.

Pretty soon, the characters have taken over the story, and that’s when I have the most fun writing.

Maybe it doesn’t even get to the killing of the guard. Once I know the characters and drop them into a situation, once I know those characters, they’ll veer left or right. They’ll demand I change my carefully plotted outline.

And that’s where I have a lot of fun, when the characters come to life.

I actually find it incredibly hard to start with the characters first, because then I’m trying to come up with things to throw at them to keep them interested and interesting.

It’s probably why I have such a hard time writing sequels. The characters are already there . . .