Dear Potential Reader,
THE AIR is Another tale of the Hatchback Woman is set at a party hosted by a scout leader hoping to teach his scouts a very important lesson. But that couldn’t go as planned, not when one of the Lady’s gifts is present . . .
The following short story is one of the many Hatchback Woman stories where i tried to hide the formula and approach the ‘telling’ in a different way. In this case, I used a flashback, so the structure is B-A-C instead of the straightforward A-B-C of a normally told tale. Whether this enhances the story is always up for debate.
Hope you enjoy.
All the best,
DAN JIRE
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